Grades 6–8 · Language
How can a paraphrase keep a claim’s meaning?
A paraphrase restates information in a new form while keeping its meaning. It is more than replacing a few words with similar words. The relationships, qualifications and limits of the original claim remain part of what must be preserved.
In the diagramA paraphrase changes wording, not the claimOriginal observation and a restatementOriginal: on Monday at noon,exactly two of three benches were shaded.At noon on Monday, shade coveredexactly two of the park’s three benches.The original specifies a count and a time.The count, group and time are preserved.
The original fictional observation says that on Monday at noon, exactly two of three park benches were shaded. It specifies a group of three benches, a shaded count of two and one particular time. It does not describe every bench elsewhere or establish that the same pattern occurs every day.
At noon on Monday, shade covered exactly two of the park’s three benches gives that information with a different sentence structure. Exactly two of the park’s three benches were shaded at noon on Monday changes the ordering again. Both retain the count, group and time, so the wording differs without broadening the observation.
All three park benches were shaded at noon on Monday is different: it changes the shaded count from two to three. Similar vocabulary does not make the claim equivalent. Preserving meaning requires attention to what the sentence commits to, not just what it sounds like. When another author’s ideas are paraphrased, changed wording also does not remove the need to acknowledge that source.
About this explanation
Starting knowledge: Read short statements and track quantities, time references and the group a claim describes.
Sources
- Purdue University, Purdue OWL — Paraphrase: Write It in Your Own Words